520 | Editing our writing!

23 October 2019

Hi everyone!

We have been learning about how to revise and edit a piece of writing this week. First, we revisited our editing marks before editing a passage of text together on the whiteboard. Everyone was confused about the fourth spelling error ‘wondered’, which is only incorrect in context. After reading the sentence in context we realised we needed to amend the spelling to ‘wandered’.

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-Matt Johns, Year 5 Teacher